My visual poem is about my pop warner football practice. Some of the pictures are of my football team doing warm ups, drills, and scrimmages. I think the visuals helps make an impact by making my poem more interesting. People can learn from it and may want to know more about football. They may even want to watch other videos on football.
I am not satisfied with my results because I needed to add in more special effects and work on my timing with the pictures and my voice. Also I accidentally cut out the last line of my poem because I pressed the button too early. I could make my visual poem better by having the last sentence in my video. Then my visual poem would be more complete.
sorry im not done with it
ReplyDeleteGood visuals
ReplyDeleteneeds to be longer
good lyrics
Good B-Roll !!!!
ReplyDeleteThe audio was bad, you could've went in a more quieter place.
Good Poem ! :)
I like the pictures of the players.
ReplyDeleteyou could of balanced the audio.
Cool sound bites
I like the shots.
ReplyDeleteThe voice is way too loud.
I like the backround noises.
Compliment:The background noise helped me visualize football players tackling each other
ReplyDeleteCriticism:At the same time though the sound was too overpowering
Compliment: The poem was very descriptive
Nice clear audio
ReplyDeleteAudio was way TOO loud!!Need more videos and your visual poem is a little bit short
Good job over all!! I like football
The pictures of you guys doing scrimmage was good.
ReplyDeleteIt doesn't sound like a poem, it sounds like your just talking to somebody. Also, it was cut off at the end of the poem.
The sounds of people being hit in football made it better.
I liked the noise in the background. It was kind of hard to hear what you were saying. I liked the shots of you guys playing.
ReplyDeleteI like how you got the football players in action.
ReplyDeleteI think one thing that could be better is the sound in the back round is kind of loud.
I also like your transition that you had.
Compliment: Good Pictures
ReplyDeleteCriticism Short need more picture need music poem more like a story
Compliment: Good audio effects
I like how you had the sound effects to match your poem.
ReplyDeleteYou might have wanted to use the ken burns effect or some effect it would have helped add to your poem.
Other than that you had a really creative topic!
Good use of sound effects but you could've turned them down a bit because they're a bit of a surprise ah! Great on-location b-roll of your football team!
ReplyDeleteI like the B-roll.
ReplyDeleteOne thing that could be better is the volume of your Visual poem because it is a little to loud.
I really like the content of your A-roll and how it matched your pictures really well.
I like the b-roll.
ReplyDeleteThe poem finished to early, also the audio was unbalanced.
I also like how you used sound effects they were just a bit loud.
Nice B-roll
ReplyDeleteYour poem is a little short and you could lower the audio plus you could get some video
Great job
I liked the B-Roll that you got.
ReplyDeleteYour audio was a bit loud, and there was no video B-Roll
I liked the transitions and effects you used and the sound effects matched the B-Roll
Voice over was well recorded.
ReplyDeleteI wish there were videos and not only pictures and also the sound effects were a little too loud.
I liked the positioning of the effects because it matched the scene.
has good pictures
ReplyDeletethere could be b-roll and sound effects are to loud
the voice over was good
Really nice pictures
ReplyDeleteToo loud !!!
Good words
Compliment: I liked your pictures and how they went with what you were saying.
ReplyDeleteCriticism: I think you should've lowered the audio a little bit and had some video B-Roll
Compliment: I liked the way you recited your poem
Your B-roll of the ball park was great
ReplyDeleteBe clearer and turn down the music and a roll
Nice shots of the game
Compliment: I liked your visuals. They were related to what you were saying.
ReplyDeleteCriticism: I think that your audio was a too loud and you could have added more video and less pictures.
Compliment: Overall you did pretty good. I liked the way you recited the poem.
The background noise of the team chanting was nice. Could have made it a little longer. Like the shot of the team practicing.
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